I sometimes leave myself little notes like this, and forget I have done so. Who is this me who writes these stupid notes and expects me to fix this shit later?Now I have to abandon the new scene I was planning and write some dialogue that does not suck.
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And will you share with us the piece of unsucking dialogue you came up with?
"Warn me," Rafe said. "Huh. Fair enough. I guess you could crush me like a tiny insect if I weren't careful."
It still kind of sucks, in my opinion, but at least he says *something* now!
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