Saturday, January 21, 2012

In which my shoddy work habits are revealed

I sometimes leave myself little notes like this, and forget I have done so. Who is this me who writes these stupid notes and expects me to fix this shit later?

Now I have to abandon the new scene I was planning and write some dialogue that does not suck.


Anonymous said...

And will you share with us the piece of unsucking dialogue you came up with?

clairification said...

"Warn me," Rafe said. "Huh. Fair enough. I guess you could crush me like a tiny insect if I weren't careful."

It still kind of sucks, in my opinion, but at least he says *something* now!