Saturday, January 21, 2012

In which my shoddy work habits are revealed

I sometimes leave myself little notes like this, and forget I have done so. Who is this me who writes these stupid notes and expects me to fix this shit later?

Now I have to abandon the new scene I was planning and write some dialogue that does not suck.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

And will you share with us the piece of unsucking dialogue you came up with?

clairification said...

"Warn me," Rafe said. "Huh. Fair enough. I guess you could crush me like a tiny insect if I weren't careful."

It still kind of sucks, in my opinion, but at least he says *something* now!